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Saturday, February 23, 2013

When a Relationship takes a flight !!

When a relationship
takes a flight.......

Darkness starts nourishing
the thoughts.......
with the water of
melting heart,
You are not sad
You are not angry
You have no time
but you are not in hurry !

When a relationship
takes a flight........

Soul starts questioning
the existence.....
in deep silent
and smoking voice,
You are not dead
You are not alive
You got no wings
But you want to fly !

When a relationship
takes a flight.........!!

Archana
18.02.2013

8 comments:

  1. Wow! Truly beautiful! Though, I wish you'd have specified Soul starts questioning existence of what. :) I guess, you meant existence of one falling in 'love'. :)

    Thanks for sharing it with me. :)

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    1. Thanks Ketan! Soul starts questioning the existence of existence itself. Like why existing? Yea, existence of the one who is in love :) Your feed back matters a lot :)

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  2. Sweetness of the words make this a reflection of your love's flight. Thanks for sharing.

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    1. Thanks Parekhit for your words. Sharing with you is an honour always. Be around.

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  3. When a relationship takes a flight... lot more things happened, requesting you to please complete this, I want to read in continuation in the same poem :)

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    1. Yes, Yawar! When a Relationship takes a flight, lots and lots of processes keep going on and keep acting as fuel to continue the flight. I will try to add on in continuation , though may turn out a prose piece. Thanks for your sincere motivation and I do value it. :)

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  4. Beautifully written. Truth it is, indeed!

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